Landing Page Mockup Feedback

After speaking with Calogero Gattuso, he suggested the following changes and additions.

Header
Ramsay Safety Logo to small, make bigger more prominent
Move top navigation bar down a touch looks like too close to the top of the page
Contact Us to appear in each of the images
Review message on Header and match up the correct image for the message being communicated

Header Message 1 with appropriate image
Affordable annual Retainer fees renewed on a yearly basis

Header Message 2 with appropriate image
Bespoke training programmes tailored to your companies risks

Header Message 3 with appropriate image
Simple easy to understand Audits

Header Message 4 with appropriate image
HSE visit? We can help with corrective actions

Welcome
Change text to:
Our aim is to simplify Health and Safety by making life easier for our clients by offering realistic pragmatic advice and solutions.
Our objective is to provide consultancy services to organisations of all sizes in various sectors and environments.
We work with all types of SME's to comply with insurance risk improvements.

Video Clip
Improve quality images, logo, change address to main office address in Ware.
Edit script slightly changing industries.
Video Clip Example: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UmvyaEkgC_4&feature=youtu.be

Add 'Why we are different' section
[Shorten text]
The client does not need to sign long contacts, all that we ask is that you stay with us for one year, if we are not exceeding your expectations you can walk away no questions asked!
We believe it's important to work with local companies, offering them good customer service and flexibility.
We work in partnership with our clients to fully support and manage your Health and Safety compliance.
We always meet our prospective clients to understand their specific risks within their business.
All our work is bespoke to each client.
Our involvement releases your time so that you can that you can run your business
We can undertake a review of existing documentation free of charge and advise if this meets compliance.

Icons missing
Facebook, Twitter, LinkedIn, YouTube in the footer.
Phone icon? Then 0800 number underneath? E-mail envelope Icon in the header section.
Contact form and map missing

Services
Add Health and Safety Accreditation schemes to the services section and descriptive text underneath. We are able to assist our clients to gain various safety accreditations including CHAS, EXOR, Construction Line and Safe Contractor.

Add Awareness Training to the services section and descriptive text underneath. We are able to offer a selection of courses from our main offices in Ware which include Manual Handling, Asbestos Awareness and Fire Warden training.

Is there an alternative icon instead of a happy grin? Thumbs up?

Testimonials
Add Testimonials header above image - Not sure about the image can we buy a suitable image instead.

Our Team
Photos Seem a bit square make them blend in maybe a border around the photo, add descriptive text underneath each picture e.g.

Calogero Gattuso - Director - Principal Health and Safety Consultant
Alfonsina Gattuso - Director - Finance and Administration Support
Sofia Gattuso - Graphic Designer/ IT Advisor

Latest News
Add Three more blog posts under Latest New making 6 in total.
Add Accurate image that reflects the blog latest news content

About Us Page
We operated in the Chemical Industry, Manufacturing, Engineering, Aerospace, Communications and Educational sectors. Utilising this experience, we are able to deal with the most difficult of projects with a common-sense approach.
We believe in working closely with our clients, using our expertise, to achieve compliance.
Our Consultants are registered with the Occupational Safety and Health Consultants Register and have gained NEBOSH Qualifications at Diploma level, and belong to various institutions, including
The Institute of Occupational Safety and Health
International Institute of Risk and Safety Management
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